Please critique my fund raising letter :)

[jholland1964]

Is there any way you can get the Habitat for Humanity logo in there someplace? Will they allow you to use their logo in this someplace? I only ask because this would let folks know that this IS an approved "by them" fundraiser if their logo appears within either your logo or within the body of the letter itself because in order to use their logo you would have to have their permission. I only suggest this because anybody can sponsor a fundraiser and say it is for "something"...but it really isn't.

[Heylinder]

Is there any way you can get the Habitat for Humanity logo in there someplace? Will they allow you to use their logo in this someplace? I only ask because this would let folks know that this IS an approved "by them" fundraiser if their logo appears within either your logo or within the body of the letter itself because in order to use their logo you would have to have their permission. I only suggest this because anybody can sponsor a fundraiser and say it is for "something"...but it really isn't.

I think you are right I'll see what I can do as far as putting the HFH logo in. At the kick off meeting we were all given permission to use their logo for fundraising.

Thanks for your suggestions Ms Judy

[Heylinder]

How is this?

[Heylinder]

I've gotten approval on the letter as shown here. The Director was very pleased with it Also this is a very small community so combining the logo's is not really necessary. People just take your word around here ... there's no place like home